B??? B??I ???TI???NG V???NG??? RA KH???I S??CH GI??O KHOA

B??? B??I ???TI???NG V???NG??? RA KH???I S??CH GI??O KHOA
(Ti???ng Vi???t - L???p 5 t???p m???t)
Nh???ng t??c ph???m ???????c tuy???n ch???n v??o s??ch gi??o khoa l?? nh???ng t??c ph???m tinh hoa kinh ??i???n c?? gi?? tr??? cao v??? n???i dung t?? t?????ng, ngh??? thu???t ???????c th??? th??ch qua th???i gian v?? ph?? h???p t??m l?? l???a tu???i h???c sinh. Ch??ng ta ai c??ng c?? tu???i th?? c???p s??ch ?????n tr?????ng v?? nh???ng b??i v??n, b??i th?? t??? thu??? ???u tr?? ???????c ??n s??u trong tr?? nh??? v?? ??i theo su???t cu???c ?????i c???a ch??ng ta, n?? l?? m???u m???c trong s??ng v??? t??nh y??u qu?? h????ng, ?????t n?????c, v??? t??nh c???m y??u th????ng kh??ng th??? x??a nh??a:
"B??? c??? c??n h??i s????ng
N???ng v??ng tr???i tr??n ???????ng
C??nh cao chim ch??o ????n
Ch??ng em ??i t???i tr?????ng
M???t h???i k???ng khua vang
T???ng ?????i ?????ng x???p h??ng
M???t nghi??m nh??n c??? ?????
Ph???p ph???i ??nh sao v??ng
Em h???a th???m c??ng B??c
N??m nay ch??u h???c ngoan!"
(T???p ?????c c???p m???t nh???ng n??m h???c th???p k??? 60 th??? k??? tr?????c)
L???a tu???i n??m s??u m????i h??m nay kh??ng ai l?? kh??ng nh??? b??i th?? t???i tr?????ng n??y!
Th??? h??? sau n??y, c??c em c??ng ???????c h???c nh???ng b??i th?? r???t hay, nh???ng v???n th?? chan ch???a t??nh c???m, h??m s??c, ??m vang v?? ng??n xa:
"H??m qua em t???i tr?????ng
M??? d???t tay t???ng b?????c
H??m nay m??? l??n n????ng
M???t m??nh em t???i l???p
H????ng r???ng ????a th??m ng??t
N?????c su???i trong th?? th???m
C??? x??e ?? che n???ng
R??m m??t ???????ng em ??i!..."
Hay:
"R???ng c??? ??i r???ng c???
L?? ?????p xanh ng???i ng???i
Khi y??u th?????ng v???n g???i
M???t tr???i xanh c???a t??i!"
Th??? m?? sang th??? k??? XXI, trong s??ch gi??o khoa l???i c?? tuy???n ch???n nh???ng b??i th?? kh??ng ra th??, v??n kh??ng ra v??n, c?? nh???ng b??i ??ang ??? d???ng th??? nghi???m ch??a ???????c c??ng ch??ng th???m ?????nh, th??? m?? l???i ???????c ????a v??o s??ch gi??o khoa ??? tu???i ???u tr?? gi???ng d???y. ??i???n h??nh l?? b??i "Ti???ng v???ng' c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u - s??ch gi??o khoa Ti???ng Vi???t - l???p 5 t???p m???t - Nh?? xu???t b???n Gi??o d???c Vi???t Nam t??i b???n l???n th??? 5 - th??ng 1 n??m 2011).
Nguy??n b???n:
Nguy???n Quang Thi???u
TI???NG V???NG
Con chim s??? nh??? ch???t r???i
Ch???t trong ????m c??n b??o v??? g???n s??ng
????m ???y t??i n???m trong ch??n nghe ti???ng chim ?????p c???a
S??? ???m ??p g???i ch??n ???? gi??? ch???t t??i
V?? t??i ng??? ngon l??nh ?????n l??c b??o v??i.
Chi???c t??? c?? trong ???ng tre ?????u nh?? chi???u gi?? h??
Kh??ng c??n nghe ti???ng c??nh chim s??? v???
V?? ti???ng h??t m???i s???m mai trong v???t
N?? ch???t tr?????c c???a nh?? t??i l???nh ng???t
M???t con m??o h??ng x??m l???i tha ??i
N?? ????? l???i trong ??? nh???ng qu??? tr???ng
Nh???ng con chim non m??i m??i ch???ng ra ?????i
????m ????m t??i v???a ch???p m???t
C??nh c???a l???i rung l??n ti???ng ?????p c??nh
Nh???ng qu??? tr???ng l???i l??n v??o gi???c ng???
Ti???ng l??n nh?? ???? l??? tr??n ng??n ./.
????? HO??NG D???CH RA TH?? VI???T
TI???NG V???NG
Chim s??? m??? m???t r???i
????m b??o v??? g???n s??ng
T??i n???m trong ch??n ???m
Ngon l??nh ?????n b??o v??i!
Th??? m?? ??? ngo??i tr???i
T??? chim ?????y gi?? h??
Con m??o nh?? th?? d???
C???p s??? m??? ch???y d??i!
T??? nay kh??ng c??n n???a
C??nh chim v???n ban mai!
V?? v???ng tr??ng c???a tr???ng
M??i m??i ch???ng ra ?????i!
????m ????m t??i ch???p m???t
C??nh c???a nh?? rung vang
Tr???ng l??n v??o gi???c ng???
Nh?? ???? l??? tr??n ng??n !
H?? N???i ng??y 9 th??ng 6 n??m 2012
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B??nh gi???ng
Ti???ng v???ng l?? m???t b??i vi???t tr???c tr???c, l???ng ca, l???ng c???ng, th???a ??, thi???u l???i, th???a l???i thi???u ??, t?? duy r???i r???m, l???n x???n, kh??ng nh???t qu??n, l???i r???c r???i, t?? m??, t???i ngh??a... Nh?? n??i ??? tr??n n?? kh??ng ra v??n v???n, kh??ng ra v??n xu??i, th?? c??ng kh??ng ph???i th??, v?? c??ng kh??ng ph???i v??, v??n t??? c??ng kh??ng ra v??n t???, ph?? c??ng kh??ng ra ph??, h??t ru em c??ng kh??ng ru h??t ru em, h??t vui ch??i c??ng kh??ng ra h??t vui ch??i, tri???t h???c c??ng kh??ng ra tri???t h???c.... N?? ch??nh l?? lo???i V?? l???i ?????c tr??ng c??ch vi???t c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u v?? nhi???u ng?????i vi???t h??m nay th??? hi???n; r???i nhi???u ng?????i, nhi???u t??? ch???c l??ng x?? l??n m??y xanh, ngay c??? H???i Nh?? v??n Vi???t Nam c??ng trao t???ng gi???i th?????ng th?? n??m 1993 cho t???p "S??? m???t ng??? c???a l???a" c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u.
T??i ?????c b??i n??y nhi???u l???n, nhi???u n??m. L??c n??o t??i c??ng b??n kho??n: - V?? sao c??c nh?? l??m s??ch l???i ch???n b??i n??y v??o s??ch gi??o khoa d???y cho c??c em l???p 5 ?????u h???c k??? m???t tu???i m???i l??n 9, l??n 10?
N???i dung c???a b??i Ti???ng v???ng n??i s??? v?? t??nh c???a m???t em b?? v??? c??i ch???t c???a con chim s??? m??? ????? cho bao th??? h??? chim non kh??ng ra ?????i!
Con chim s??? nh??? v?? c??n b??o v??? g???n s??ng ch???t, t??c gi??? x??ng t??i v?? ng??? qu??n trong s??? ???m ??p n??n kh??ng bi???t n?? ch???t, m??o h??ng x??m l???i tha chim ??i, ????? nh???ng qu??? tr???ng kh??ng c?? chim m??? ???p m??i m??i kh??ng n??? th??nh chim con!
Ch??? t???ng ???y th??i nh??ng Nguy???n Quang Thi???u l???i l??m r???c r???i ?????n n???i nhi???u th???y c?? d???y b??i kh??ng hi???u ra, ch??? n??i g?? ?????n tr??? con!
B??i vi???t ?????y nh???ng c??i v?? l?? v?? th???a th???i.
N??i chim l?? n??i ng?????i, chim ??? ????y ???????c nh??n c??ch h??a, kh??ng ai n??i con chim s??? nh??? ch???t r???i. Ngh??a t??? l?? ngh??a t???n, chim ch???t c??ng nh?? ng?????i ch???t, kh??ng ai t??ng t???n l??ng m??nh n??i t??? con v?? t??? ch???t. Con d??ng cho s??? khinh mi???t: con r???n, con s??u, con ????, con ph??, con ca ve...Ch???t d??ng cho s??? khinh mi???t: con ch?? ch???t, con chu???t ch???t, con s??u ch???t. C??n kh??ng ai n??i con v?? ch???t cho ng?????i v?? v???t, nh???ng g?? m??nh y??u m???n.
"B??c D????ng th??i ????, th??i r???i
N?????c non man m??c ng???m ng??i l??ng ta!"
( Nguy???n Khuy???n kh??c D????ng Khu??)
?????c b??i Ti???ng v???ng th???y vi???t c??u th??? nh???t l?? "Con chim s??? nh??? ch???t r???i" v?? sau ???? c??u th??? m?????i m???t l?? "N?? ????? l???i trong t??? nh???ng qu??? tr???ng" th?? ng?????i ?????c b??n kho??n : "Con chim s??? nh??? m???i toe toe m?? bi???t ?????"(!) M?? ????? r???t nhi???u, ????? ra c??? ??? tr???ng (!). ?????y l?? s??? v?? l??.
C??u k??? n??y r???t b??nh th?????ng, n?? thua c??? c??u v??n xu??i!
Chim s??? ai ch??? bi???t l?? n?? nh???. T???c ng??? n??i " t???m cho s??? ??n", t???c l?? ch??? s??? nh??? b?? c???a chim s???. S??? ???? nh??? th?? con chim s??? nh???, nh??? bi???t ch???ng n??o, ch???c l?? n?? m???i ra r??ng, sao l???i g??n cho n?? m???t ??? tr???ng.
C?? nhi???u c??ch vi???t h???p l?? h??n nhi???u:
" Chim s??? m??? qua l??c b??o v??? g???n s??ng"...
Nh???ng ng?????i ch???t tr???, ch???t oan, b???t ?????c k??? t???c, ng?????i Vi???t hay d??ng ch???qua, nh?? ch??? qua, anh qua, em qua...
Kh??ng ai nh???n t??m n??i:
"Con chim s??? nh??? ch???t r???i
N?? ch???t trong ????m b??o v??? g???n s??ng"
Nhi???u c??u trong b??i Ti???ng v???ng v?? ngh??a, th???a th???i, v?? l???n x???n:
"Chi???c t??? c?? trong ???ng tre ?????u nh?? chi???u gi?? h??".
Chi???c t??? c?? trong ???ng tre ?????u nh?? l?? ????? r???i, m???c chi ????a chi???u gi?? h?? v??o ????y? Chi???u gi?? h?? c?? th??? m???t c??u th?? ???????c nh??ng n?? ??? v??n c???nh kh??c kh??ng th??? ?????p r??u ??ng n??? ch???p c???m b?? kia!
N???u s???p x???p c??u k??o v?? h???p v???i l?? gic th?? c??u th??? 9 trong b??i ph???i ?????t l??n c??u th??? ba m???i ????ng v?? h???p t??nh h???p l??, h???p v??n c???nh'
" Con chim s??? nh??? ch???t r???i
Ch???t trong ????m c??n b??o v??? g???n s??ng
N?? ch???t tr?????c c???a nh?? t??i l???nh ng???t".
??? ????y th??m ??i???u v?? l?? n???a. Chim s??? m??? ??ang ???p l??m g?? c?? chim tr???ng ?????n h??t nh?? t??c gi??? t?????ng t?????ng ra:
"V?? ti???ng h??t m???i s???m mai trong v???t" (!)
"V?? ti???ng h??t m???i s???m mai trong v???t" Ti???ng chim h??t trong v???t hay "Ban mai trong v???t?
T??c gi??? khen ti???ng chim trong v???t hay khen ban mai trong v???t? H???c sinh 9, 10 tu???i m???i l??n l???p 5 l??m sao bi???t ???????c.
R???i nh???ng ki???u n??i cho l??? tai kh??ng thu???n Vi???t:
"S??? ???m ??p g???i ch??n ???? gi??? ch???t t??i" T??y th???t c??ng ch???ng n??i ki???u n??y! D???ch ra ngh??a Vi???t l?? " Vi???c ???m ??p c???a g???i ch??n ???? gi??? ch???t t??i" . C?? th??? c?? c??ch n??i: ch??n ???m, g???i ??m l??m t??i ng??? y??n!
Ti???ng v???ng d??ng t??? l???p l???i ?????c nghe c??u th?? n???ng n???:
"M???t con m??o h??ng x??m l???i tha ??i
N?? ????? l???i trong t??? nh???ng qu??? tr???ng
.....
Nh???ng qu??? tr???ng l???i l??n v??o gi???c ng???..."
T??i c?? h???i nhi???u nh?? gi??o d???c, nhi???u nh?? s?? ph???m v??? b??i Ti???ng v???ng c???a Nguy???n Quang Thi???u ???????c ch???n in trong s??ch gi??o khoa - Ti???ng Vi???t - L???p 5 t???p m???t.
Th???c s??? gi??o d???c, nh?? th??, d???ch gi???, Tr?????ng ban bi??n t???p, ph??? tr??ch T???p ch?? Nghi??n c???u Gi??o d???c Tr???n H???u, ??ng cho bi???t: " ????y l?? b??i ??ang d???ng th??? nghi???m n??n kh??ng th??? ????a v??o s??ch gi??o khoa nh???t l?? s??ch Ti???ng Vi???t l???p 5, t???p m???t. B??i Ti???ng v???ng nhi???u ng?????i l???n kh??ng hi???u, l??m sao tr??? hi???u n???i. S??ch gi??o khoa b??y gi??? c??n nhi???u b??i nh?? th??? n??y c???n n??n lo???i b???!"
Th???y Tr???n ?????c Trung, t??? tr?????ng chuy??n m??n kh???i 5, c?? gi??o Nguy???n Th??? Kim Y???n, gi??o vi??n d???y gi???i th??nh ph??? Hu??? d???y l???p 5, c?? Thu Dung gi??o vi??n d???y l???p 5 ??? tr?????ng Ti???u h???c Thu???n L???c, th??nh ph??? Hu??? ?????u n??i :
- "Ti???ng v???ng" l?? m???t b??i ?? t??? l???ng c??ng, ng??n t??? l???n x???n, kh?? hi???u ?????i v???i c??c em h???c sinh m???i l??n l???p 5. B??i vi???t kh??ng v???n ??i???u, kh??ng ??i s??u v??o l??ng ng?????i nh???t l?? h???c sinh ti???u h???c! C??c th???y c?? gi??o c??n ch??a hi???u ???????c l??m sao h???c sinh hi???u ???????c!
C??ng r???t may m???n l?? n??m h???c v???a r???i (n??m 2011 - 2012) ??? Th???a Thi??n - Hu??? tu??n theo ch??? ?????o c???a B??? Gi??o d???c v?? ????o t???o trong k??? ho???ch gi???m thi???u ch????ng tr??nh n???ng n??? ???? lo???i b??i Ti???ng v???ng kh??ng d???y cho h???c sinh.
N??m h???c t???i s??ch gi??o khoa Ti???ng Vi???t l???p 5 n??n lo???i b??? b??i Ti???ng v???ng ra kh???i s??ch gi??o khoa v?? nhi???u b??i phi v??n ch????ng kh??c!
Nh?? th?? ????? Ho???ng